I like how you gave qoutes for each reason and that you had three good reasons but some thing you need to work on is you conclustion
i like how you were talking loud and clear
I like how you give us clear evidence and reason and your expression, but you have to work on Ending and you can give us some a lesson
I like your claim and reasoning and can you please speak louder. Thanks!
I liked how you were giving quotes for each person teaching us that the people believed in themselves, but I think you need to explain why the quotes support your claim.
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I like how you gave qoutes for each reason and that you had three good reasons but some thing you need to work on is you conclustion
ReplyDeletei like how you were talking loud and clear
ReplyDeleteI like how you give us clear evidence and reason and your expression, but you have to work on Ending and you can give us some a lesson
ReplyDeleteI like your claim and reasoning and can you please speak louder. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you were giving quotes for each person teaching us that the people believed in themselves, but I think you need to explain why the quotes support your claim.
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